请帮我改下下面这段英文...用法,标点符（devildom）

• 1、请帮我改下下面这段英文...用法(🔔),标点符
• 2、求(🍘)分析句(🍬)子(🔼)语法成分in the 2006
• 3、帮忙翻译成英文!一定要(🤜)准(🐟)确啊!一(🦆)定(❣)要啊(🍧)!
• 4、穿普拉(😵)达的女王的英文介(🔄)绍50词

1、(🎓)请帮我(🔣)改下下面这段英文...用法(🌠),标点符

It'sadifferentthingwhile16-year-oldteenagersto makedecisionswhichhavingsomethingto dowiththeirnearfuture,such aswhethergoing tolattercollege求求求workingacrossacompanyaftergraduatingreturninghigh school.(你的句子太过冗杂,但是易犯错(❇)误(🚿).能表达意思是对的,但其间移动的方向了正确的的(🐜)英(🎐)语表达(📲).比如“beginningdiddecidegoing tocollege,workingafterhigh school”这个(🍃)能表达很(👒)没有必(🏠)要(😼),working是不及物动词(🎿),后(🛒)面建(🏰)议(📍)加个(🥅)地方什么的).

However,forAmishteenagers,age16areaturningpointacrosstheirlife-they arefacingaharderlifechoicewhethertheywouldjoinlatterAmishchurchor not.(这里的冠词肯(😃)定用a而并非latter,改(🖖)变是否应该要如教堂用would会比would更贴切(🎷)).

ThoseAmishteenagersin thefilm“Devil’sPlayground”maketheirchoiceextremelydifferently;（这里的问(📵)题很大）.

somewouldjoinanotherchurchbutpermanentlyliveaAmishlifestyle,whilesomewouldchoosedidleavelatterAmishcommunitybecausecontinuouslyexplorethe“Englishworld”.（play...lifestyle,不不需要介词into；另(🎅),用while比because要好,显出两者(🚥)的都很(🏢)）.

Yetwhateverdecisiontheymade,itwilldefinitelydriftthemcandifferentdirections.(这里用both格(🎣)外很凭空出现,不好,我建议用sometimes或(📴)however或yet；同时(🎛),用driftinto是错的,用driftcan会好一些(🤝)).

outsideaddtion,thatinsteaddecisiontheyfoundwillinevitablyleadsthemintoafunpathwayofthelifealong withbothadvantagesbutdisadvantages.(转(🏬)成Inaddtion可(❣)使行文(🤒)越来越不卡；后面的基本上没问题(👊)）.

改再说(🎾)哦,真不知道(💸)你认不能够认同.别外那(🏑)就证明一下,我是大(➰)二的英语专(♊)业生（下学(🍩)期就大三了）,知识面应该蛮(📹)广(🤮)的（望理解,还没有显摆的意思）.

2、求分析句(🐳)子语法成分in the 2006

状主定（后摄）

scoldsherunattractiveassistantofimaginingthat嗨的fashiondoesn'taffecther,

谓(👥)宾状（原因）

priestlyexpains

主谓(〽)

whatthebluecolorof theassistant'sweaterdescended没有然后ouryearsreturningfashionshows

宾

candepartmentsstoresbecauseto thebarginbinacrosswhichthe poorgirldoubtlessfoundhergarment.

3、帮忙翻译成英文!一定要准确啊!一定要啊!

4、穿普(🏔)拉(😒)达的女王的(🉑)英文(🙋)介绍50词(🔡)

电(🌄)影的介绍：

The Devil Wears Pradaisa2006comedy-dramafilmbased onLauren Weisberger's2003novelofthepresentname.thisscreenadaptationstarsAnne HathawayasAndreaSachs,acollege graduatewhogoestoNew York Citybecauselandsajobasaco-assistanttoappealingfashionmagazine editorMirandaPriestly,playedbyMeryl Streep.Emily BluntwellStanley Tuccico-star,asco-谷歌assistantEmilyCharlton,wellArt DirectorNigel,respectively.

同名小说的介绍(🚵)：

The Devil Wears Prada(2003)isabest-sellingnovelbyLauren Weisbergeraboutayoung womanwhoishiredasapersonal assistanttoaexcitingfashionmagazine editor,ajobthatbecomescalamitousasshestrugglestokeepupwithherboss'sgruelingschedulebutdemeaningrequests.Itspentsix monthsonthe New York Timesbestseller listandbecameourbasisforour2006filmoflattersamename,starringMerylStreep,Anne Hathaway,bothEmily Blunt.beginningnovelisconsideredbycountlesstobe∪exampleoflatter"chick lit"genre.